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Remember me she said (Free verse) by Caducus
You became the quarrel of crows
My quarrel was with God
Silent as the rose
That fell with my tears
From oval tombs
To your plywood bed.
Plastic expressions
With plastic wreaths
Your Father carries you
For the first time and last,
And our honest baby cried
For milk and dust
By weeping crocodiles
Impatient for the buffet.
Remember me she said
Remember me she said
But I want to forget you
Yet God doesnât let you
And all my life
I remember you dead.
Remember me she said
Remember she said
In October when you tread
With leaves I lay now dead
Remember me she said
Remember me she said
But you always haunt me
In bare oaks that taunt me
As I walk upon the dead,
I remember what you said
And lay a rose upon your bed.
The crows have gone
And God has won
You fell from life
Yet rised as sun,
And I remember
I remember
You lived in me
When you died in December
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Posted: October 27, 2005 6:29 AM PDT; Last modified: October 27, 2005 6:29 AM PDT
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