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Falling (Other) by <~> Twenty two, and August offers a yellow vanguard
much too soon
Seven days more and a tongue of fire
licks my eye
burns away with a single leaving
summer's long green
day dream
Night comes quick
and I mourn my loss
before it hits
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Posted: September 3, 2002 11:41 AM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2002 1:45 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.4444447 Overall Rank: 739 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.174
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4-Sep-02/7:13 AM
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a beautiful natural picture.One must be a Nature-hater to give you 1!7
Much better.I like it peculiarly!
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