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Falling (Other) by <~>

Twenty two, and August offers a yellow vanguard much too soon Seven days more and a tongue of fire licks my eye burns away with a single leaving summer's long green day dream Night comes quick and I mourn my loss before it hits

vulcan 4-Sep-02/11:42 PM
Much better.I like it peculiarly!




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