on Stars Of The Sky by GTK
15 Nov 2002, 2:44 AM
it's nice.one likes to recite it on some occasions.7
on On the Swings by Christof
18 Oct 2002, 8:36 AM
10!
on Warmth Amidst Winter by loneshadow29
14 Oct 2002, 8:50 AM
nice!7
on An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29
15 Nov 2002, 2:42 AM
I think if you use past tense(fighted/proved)the sense of nothingness will become more oppressing in the poem.
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2002, 2:49 AM
it's intersting.7
on It's something about you by devina
8 Oct 2002, 4:15 AM
good!(schiwwer?Norwegian?=shiver?)
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 9:39 AM
that must be 10.
on An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29
15 Nov 2002, 2:40 AM
very much like "sanity's defeat".but I guess there's no more a "one day".it's for that 'he's tombstone.7
on Determination by Birdman42s
15 Nov 2002, 2:57 AM
yes!sounds decisive.it's really good.yes you've lost the rhythm in last line I can say.10.maybe the last satanza has no problem.but is less powerful than the rest of it.
on The Funnyman by Christof
10 Nov 2002, 11:09 PM
It's mighty good.yours be the holy laurel bough!100
on Something Must Be by Birdman42s
3 Nov 2002, 7:47 AM
yes something must be I knew.nice
on some deleted poem
3 Nov 2002, 7:49 AM
your best friend!10
on Living Conditions by Christof
27 Oct 2002, 12:48 AM
Great!10
on Forever in love by devina
8 Oct 2002, 4:19 AM
too personal!(so I can not say wether i like it or not)not any poetic attempt to heighten feelings.
on Weep for Dead Heroes by Tascobar
8 Oct 2002, 5:15 AM
good!5(for I don't consider rock stars as heroes!but the poem is good otherwise!)
on Down Again by Birdman42s
3 Nov 2002, 12:28 AM
great!impressive very!
on The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss
15 Nov 2002, 2:33 AM
nice!8
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 1:12 AM
not the sort of poem i hate but the sort of stuff I do not read madam!
on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT
14 Oct 2002, 1:56 AM
beautiful!9