Re: It's something about you by devina	8-Oct-02/4:15 AM
good!(schiwwer?Norwegian?=shiver?)
Re: Forever in love by devina	8-Oct-02/4:19 AM
too personal!(so I can not say wether i like it or not)not any poetic attempt to heighten feelings.
Re: Weep for Dead Heroes by Tascobar	8-Oct-02/5:15 AM
good!5(for I don't consider rock stars as heroes!but the poem is good otherwise!)
Re: Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-02/1:56 AM
beautiful!9
Re: Warmth Amidst Winter by loneshadow29	14-Oct-02/8:50 AM
nice!7
Re: On the Swings by Christof	18-Oct-02/8:36 AM
10!
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Oct-02/1:12 AM
not the sort of poem i hate but the sort of stuff I do not read madam!
Re: Living Conditions by Christof	27-Oct-02/12:48 AM
Great!10
Re: Down Again by Birdman42s	3-Nov-02/12:28 AM
great!impressive very!
Re: Something Must Be by Birdman42s	3-Nov-02/7:47 AM
yes something must be I knew.nice
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Nov-02/7:49 AM
your best friend!10
Re: The Funnyman by Christof	10-Nov-02/11:09 PM
It's mighty good.yours be the holy laurel bough!100
Re: The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss	15-Nov-02/2:33 AM
nice!8
Re: An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29	15-Nov-02/2:40 AM
very much like "sanity's defeat".but I guess there's no more a "one day".it's for that 'he's tombstone.7
Re: An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29	15-Nov-02/2:42 AM
I think if you use past tense(fighted/proved)the sense of nothingness will become more oppressing in the poem.
Re: Stars Of The Sky by GTK	15-Nov-02/2:44 AM
it's nice.one likes to recite it on some occasions.7
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Nov-02/2:49 AM
it's intersting.7
Re: Determination by Birdman42s	15-Nov-02/2:57 AM
yes!sounds decisive.it's really good.yes you've lost the rhythm in last line I can say.10.maybe the last satanza has no problem.but is less powerful than the rest of it.
Re: The Sea by Moss	20-Nov-02/1:00 AM
tender!7
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Nov-02/9:39 AM
that must be 10.