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Frozen beauty (Haiku) by INTRANSIT Icicles looming
Crystalline guards hang watchfull
over greying skies
Up the ladder:
Butcher
Down the ladder:
of people and places (final cut)I
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Posted: October 12, 2002 11:54 AM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2002 11:54 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.65 Overall Rank: 2119 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.70
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14-Oct-02/1:56 AM
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beautiful!9
You might not have known what an acrostic was ;), but you know how to write a great haiku .9.
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