regarding some deleted poem...	28-Sep-02/1:18 PM
right!7(you did best to defend our friend Birdman against no poets!)
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-02/1:06 AM
I like this my friend!and I don't agree with you!I appreciate your understanding!I didn't expect anybody like that" Paysage Moralise"(a moralized landscape).Itwas not complex but was personal and deep(in it's personal aspects)I learned the title from apoem by Auden with the same name (a beautiful piece indeed)once more thanks very much.a 10 for your poem and understanding!
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-02/9:20 AM
That I understand!7
Re: Breathless. by Service	4-Oct-02/12:42 AM
Well I liked it!except for the last stanza!(I expected you to say "I lost my life in a peaceful dream"!but still the first line of the last stanza is good enough"but now it brings peace, I prefer to be"how do you like it?sorry just a suggestion!7/9
Re: A Gift of Beauty... by loneshadow29	5-Oct-02/10:26 AM
I really liked it!very tender and heart-piercing!BUT what on earth means that HORRIBLE homepage?if you really feel your poems you'd better do away with that page!That was not Sorrow nor despair and not even nothingness!I felt really disapointed!I hope you change your mental picture!Horror!
Re: Dad by Flattop	6-Oct-02/11:58 PM
Very nice!8
Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof	7-Oct-02/12:31 AM
Perfect!I'm happy I checked your poems!and found this strange artistic monument there!(there's no exaggeration on my part,I've read enough poetry to see what is good and what Perfect!)10
Re: Bottom by ThoughtfulSoul	7-Oct-02/7:39 AM
I think if you start with"There at the bottom is a lonely place"it would seem as if you're speaking from there.(So the force of personality shall work better in that way).good!I like personally-felt poems.(I had something very much like this esp the end of it!i.e.I understand!)6/8
Re: Friendship by Blue Magpie	8-Oct-02/12:12 AM
Very nice9
Re: Creativity. by Blue Magpie	8-Oct-02/12:16 AM
Right!(though the poem not that ceative!)nice7
Re: Tiger by Flattop	8-Oct-02/12:19 AM
last stanza I liked.6
Re: Letter to a Friend by Reuben Spiteri	8-Oct-02/12:21 AM
Good!I like the rhythm.enjoyed reading it twice.9
Re: Angels by Reuben Spiteri	8-Oct-02/12:24 AM
O very nice!I really enjoy reading your poems.feelings are expressed happily!That's effective.wish you more success.
Re: Angels by Reuben Spiteri	8-Oct-02/12:24 AM
10
Re: Maya by Reuben Spiteri	8-Oct-02/12:25 AM
Vow!you are a Poet!10000000000000
Re: Nature by Reuben Spiteri	8-Oct-02/12:28 AM
7/10!Asia?we're friends I suppose!
Re: Different Keys by Reuben Spiteri	8-Oct-02/12:31 AM
good theme!(though not your best I think!)
Re: The Wind by Reuben Spiteri	8-Oct-02/12:33 AM
the first stanza is marvelous beautiful!what a rhythmic Spirit you possess!7/8
Re: I don't fit in by devina	8-Oct-02/4:10 AM
I like this!7/10
Re: It's time you get here by devina	8-Oct-02/4:12 AM
I'm here!nice!a personal poet!i like it.