on I don't fit in by devina
8 Oct 2002, 4:10 AM
I like this!7/10
on It's time you get here by devina
8 Oct 2002, 4:12 AM
I'm here!nice!a personal poet!i like it.
on The Wind by Reuben Spiteri
8 Oct 2002, 12:33 AM
the first stanza is marvelous beautiful!what a rhythmic Spirit you possess!7/8
on Creativity. by Blue Magpie
8 Oct 2002, 12:16 AM
Right!(though the poem not that ceative!)nice7
on Letter to a Friend by Reuben Spiteri
8 Oct 2002, 12:21 AM
Good!I like the rhythm.enjoyed reading it twice.9
on Angels by Reuben Spiteri
8 Oct 2002, 12:24 AM
O very nice!I really enjoy reading your poems.feelings are expressed happily!That's effective.wish you more success.
on Maya by Reuben Spiteri
8 Oct 2002, 12:25 AM
Vow!you are a Poet!10000000000000
on Nature by Reuben Spiteri
8 Oct 2002, 12:28 AM
7/10!Asia?we're friends I suppose!
on Different Keys by Reuben Spiteri
8 Oct 2002, 12:31 AM
good theme!(though not your best I think!)
on Bottom by ThoughtfulSoul
7 Oct 2002, 7:39 AM
I think if you start with"There at the bottom is a lonely place"it would seem as if you're speaking from there.(So the force of personality shall work better in that way).good!I like personally-felt poems.(I had something very much like this esp the end of it!i.e.I understand!)6/8
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
7 Oct 2002, 12:31 AM
Perfect!I'm happy I checked your poems!and found this strange artistic monument there!(there's no exaggeration on my part,I've read enough poetry to see what is good and what Perfect!)10
on A Gift of Beauty... by loneshadow29
5 Oct 2002, 10:26 AM
I really liked it!very tender and heart-piercing!BUT what on earth means that HORRIBLE homepage?if you really feel your poems you'd better do away with that page!That was not Sorrow nor despair and not even nothingness!I felt really disapointed!I hope you change your mental picture!Horror!
on Breathless. by Service
4 Oct 2002, 12:42 AM
Well I liked it!except for the last stanza!(I expected you to say "I lost my life in a peaceful dream"!but still the first line of the last stanza is good enough"but now it brings peace, I prefer to be"how do you like it?sorry just a suggestion!7/9
on some deleted poem
30 Sep 2002, 1:06 AM
I like this my friend!and I don't agree with you!I appreciate your understanding!I didn't expect anybody like that" Paysage Moralise"(a moralized landscape).Itwas not complex but was personal and deep(in it's personal aspects)I learned the title from apoem by Auden with the same name (a beautiful piece indeed)once more thanks very much.a 10 for your poem and understanding!
on some deleted poem
28 Sep 2002, 1:18 PM
right!7(you did best to defend our friend Birdman against no poets!)
on Angels by Reuben Spiteri
8 Oct 2002, 12:24 AM
10
on Friendship by Blue Magpie
8 Oct 2002, 12:12 AM
Very nice9
on some deleted poem
30 Sep 2002, 9:20 AM
That I understand!7