on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2002, 12:26 AM
I liked the last stanza.6
on Since The Fall by harrytuttle
24 Sep 2002, 8:21 AM
I like it 7.
on Unveiled by aperfecttool77
24 Sep 2002, 12:32 AM
Don't you think that your poem recalls no special atmosphere in one's mind.It looks and sounds blank.you lack words as you've said in your poem.add something blanker at least at the end and i'll like your style.
on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
23 Sep 2002, 12:53 AM
Very nice and Classic,lenore!
on Transfixed (#2) by Christof
28 Sep 2002, 7:40 AM
10 and beyond!(it fits any anthology of perfect pure prancing poetry!)10!
on It could be a vase.... by Joyleaf
27 Sep 2002, 11:40 AM
Interesting!(I think you'd better omit "which is" in 3rd stanza)6
on Witch to Wicca by Lenore
27 Sep 2002, 11:33 AM
Excellent Lenore!(and your view is quite right!)-I think it sounds much better if you put "Spilled gasoline after "somebody's"(but did divide it so because of "Fire"?)I liked your "every minute is a hurried whisper" 9/10 (sorry is it not a house in line19,Great anyway!)
on Morning conflict by INTRANSIT
24 Sep 2002, 8:23 AM
Interesting view 7.
on Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof
24 Sep 2002, 8:33 AM
Hi Christof!you try to pierce into my psyche!I was inspired to write "a man of the world",when I recalled H.G.Wells'"A door in the wall".have you read that?one of the best short stories I've ever read.(of course the Priest and the ring was my own invention!)-A 10 for your poem!
on For You by aperfecttool77
22 Sep 2002, 11:19 AM
"when I die,it will be known I died for Coelia"read that sonnt by W.Percy?The same theme.I liked it as I liked that sonnet.(of course in a different level.)6
on some deleted poem
22 Sep 2002, 11:27 AM
Sorry,I'read something very similar to this before.I remember this because I liked it.Sorry!The last line is only different!you've added that?the poem was anonymous!Was it yours?Please let me know it!your own poems are good enough!If it's yours So 10
on The End OF Me by Birdman42s
22 Sep 2002, 11:28 AM
Nice,10!
on .:|bittersweet|:. by emman
21 Sep 2002, 9:42 AM
Well!the personae's ambiguity of character leaves an impression on reader (at least on me)7
on some deleted poem
21 Sep 2002, 11:21 AM
I like this one too.you write with genuine feelings.7
on some deleted poem
15 Sep 2002, 8:30 AM
Bravo!I liked it very much.you have expressed the feeling very truly.(just i think after the case of girlfriend poem ends unexpectedly.Did you mean it?)10
on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
23 Sep 2002, 12:54 AM
9/10
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2002, 12:55 AM
Nice!7