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The End OF Me (Free verse) by Birdman42s The End OF Me
A wall of pain to burst my being
And all the days of my life.
It disassembled pieces of me,
but I try to pick them up.
I take time to reassemble
but I can't seem to get it right.
Missing parts of me, my soul.
The pain impairs my sight
To lift the weights off me
That I carry day to day
I'll be lighter yet from the heaviest pain
This day I desire to see
Or it will be the end of me.
DLB
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Posted: September 22, 2002 9:34 AM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2002 9:34 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.15 Overall Rank: 1062 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.217
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22-Sep-02/11:28 AM
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Nice,10!
If at first you don't succeed...
Iron it out, otherwise it works.
Wow! Love the way you rapped it up 2.
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