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For You (Lyric) by aperfecttool77 We met not so long ago
I remember it like yesterday
All this time has gone by
You still keep that sparkle in your eyes
I fell in love with you
With the first touch
I just want you to know
I???ll never let you down
All through time I will
Be by your side
No matter what I will
Always love you
To feel the touch of your loving embrace
All I know is when I am with you
I am happy
And if the world stopped,
I could die with a smile on my face
-Not holding on to you,
You are the sum off all things I regret
Up the ladder:
Death in Small Houses
Down the ladder:
Night Work
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Posted: September 21, 2002 11:06 PM PDT; Last modified: September 21, 2002 11:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.695392 Overall Rank: 12033 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.217
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22-Sep-02/11:19 AM
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"when I die,it will be known I died for Coelia"read that sonnt by W.Percy?The same theme.I liked it as I liked that sonnet.(of course in a different level.)6
[thumbsup] Good job. Glad you finally got in buddy.
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