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Free verse № 5180

Night Work

by forestchild7

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Jul 2002 · 5 comments

As I wander through the night, different beings speak to me; Whether fae, spirit, human, elf, they are my children, and I must listen; The night holds many things, and my secrets are but one; As I fly, float, and dream, the stars twinkle above me; The full moon shines and I take in it's purifying energy; The whispering wind mentions my name, and I turn and carress it softly to me; My consort rides the night sky, and smiles down on me, loving me for eternity... And time rolls on, as I continue my night's work... ***April 28th, 2002***

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5 comments

[1] ==Doylum 18-Jul-02/9:48 AM Reply
Oh how offal!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Jul-02/6:19 AM Reply
If I see another poeme containing the words "whispering wind" I'm going to cut my face off. Great poeme!
[n/a] razorgrin 27-Jul-02/4:31 PM Reply
I dunno..my night's work tends to involve a crowbar, a shovel and the nearest cemetary....
[4] Fearlesfan_04 24-Feb-05/7:13 PM Reply
Are u a writer....i mean do you write stories? this was kool..kind of
[8] Sisterwolf 29-Dec-05/1:08 PM Reply
I do see one thing that might help you - don't
use and anymore than you have to. As in line 12, the first and could easily be eliminated - another thing you can do is use commas instead of and, you will convey your meaning and it's much smoother. I really do like this very much.