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Twilight (Free verse) by grrund
The day ends and twilight begins,
Your eyes twinkle like a star so bright,
Beauty,
Oh goddess, what a sight.
Your heart more wonderous than a starry night,
Capitvated,
My soul finally screams free of blight.
Eliose's beauty you may be not quite,
Alluring,
Where all kings must bow to you at night.
Finally, awash in your golden light,
Sadness,
My heart cries as you fade like a wight.
There is only darkness, nothing more in sight,
Completion,
I dream sweet dreams of you tonight.
For love starts in the twilight.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10036
Posted: September 23, 2002 8:51 PM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2002 10:00 PM PDT
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