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Twilight (Free verse) by grrund

The day ends and twilight begins, Your eyes twinkle like a star so bright, Beauty, Oh goddess, what a sight. Your heart more wonderous than a starry night, Capitvated, My soul finally screams free of blight. Eliose's beauty you may be not quite, Alluring, Where all kings must bow to you at night. Finally, awash in your golden light, Sadness, My heart cries as you fade like a wight. There is only darkness, nothing more in sight, Completion, I dream sweet dreams of you tonight. For love starts in the twilight.

vulcan 24-Sep-02/8:25 AM
A tender filial expression.Nice7




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