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It could be a vase....

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Sep 2002 · 6 comments

I could stick some flowers in it. I could put in on a table covered with a white table cloth. Then it would look like a vase, lovely and innocent, a sign of simple clean living. But it's not a vase. It's lacking flowers. It sits on my desk (which is covered with random papers) and looks like a good friend. Simple clean living is overrated.

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[6] vulcan 27-Sep-02/11:40 AM Reply
Interesting!(I think you'd better omit "which is" in 3rd stanza)6
[n/a] Joyleaf › vulcan 27-Sep-02/4:07 PM Reply
Just curious... can you pick up on what it is? I was pretty confident that the object's true identity would be understood, but I'm reading it now, and I'm not sure.
[6] vulcan › Joyleaf 28-Sep-02/7:26 AM Reply
To tell the truth I find the poem's mystery interesting!but sorry to disappoint you I really don't know what's that vaselike object!will you tell me?
[n/a] Joyleaf › vulcan 29-Sep-02/8:40 PM Reply
To be perfectly straight-forward, the object is a water pipe. But I don't use it for tobacco... I'm sorta defiant, that way.
[7] Owner of the Sky 1-Oct-02/12:27 AM Reply
I do so love a good mess myself. :o) 7 from me :D
[5] harrytuttle 1-Oct-02/9:08 AM Reply
Not a vase? A paperweight? or maybe it IS a good friend! (Do I get it?!) hmmm...