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It could be a vase.... (Other) by Joyleaf

I could stick some flowers in it. I could put in on a table covered with a white table cloth. Then it would look like a vase, lovely and innocent, a sign of simple clean living. But it's not a vase. It's lacking flowers. It sits on my desk (which is covered with random papers) and looks like a good friend. Simple clean living is overrated.

vulcan 27-Sep-02/11:40 AM
Interesting!(I think you'd better omit "which is" in 3rd stanza)6




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