| Re: 7-11-02 by durk |
8-Sep-02/10:23 PM |
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Bravo!liked it very much.
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| Re: The Battle by Birdman42s |
8-Sep-02/10:27 PM |
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(to grin,i think?)liked it7
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| Re: In my heart by Birdman42s |
8-Sep-02/10:33 PM |
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the 2 last sentences sound clumsy when read together.just a suggestion"and my heart's will be forever"or any way you like to cahange it.simple and tender.
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| Re: Untitled # 93 by nightii |
8-Sep-02/10:36 PM |
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"graceful desperation and rusting reflection"are very good!Bravo!7/0
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| Re: Tears by Birdman42s |
8-Sep-02/10:43 PM |
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your poems are all good but this one still better
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8-Sep-02/10:50 PM |
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Not very poetical,just a point to be considered.(you know how to write poetry so you'll succeed)
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8-Sep-02/10:53 PM |
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The end was the most interesting.6
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9-Sep-02/1:13 AM |
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Original!I needed to read some poem like this!thanks beloved!(no impertinance was meant!)8/10
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| Re: sensitivity as ruination by baubble |
9-Sep-02/8:31 AM |
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(you've misspelled hollow)liked it.it was a heart-felt pem.you've expressed yourself deeply.8/10
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| Re: A story of forever by tandem |
9-Sep-02/9:09 AM |
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liked very much.9.last stanza esp
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10-Sep-02/8:08 AM |
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Peaceful indeed!Bravo8/10!well sure 10!like it perfectly!
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10-Sep-02/11:58 AM |
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It's good like always christof!"under skin of veins/and skeins of nerves/cleaving close/to bone like desperation".quite professional.liked it more than others.10
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| Re: Torn... by loneshadow29 |
12-Sep-02/7:50 AM |
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| Re: Like and Unlike by Christof |
12-Sep-02/7:54 AM |
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the last images paint an unforgottable picture.9
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| Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
12-Sep-02/8:11 AM |
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Come on,Dark-angel!I read it for your sake and enjoyed it.reconcile?8
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| Re: Like and Unlike by Christof |
12-Sep-02/8:57 AM |
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Hi Christof!what have you done with your"Preconceptual"?you had such a poem or I dreamed it?just then I wanted to read it again and found it disapeared!It was very good!H'm!please tell me the reason
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12-Sep-02/9:10 AM |
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GOTT!what a dangerous poem!but the blue eyes!ha!6
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13-Sep-02/6:11 AM |
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I like your original poems and it's another one.S3 and last were wonderful.9
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| Re: Tide by <~> |
14-Sep-02/11:14 PM |
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I liked it very much like your "Falling".I sent you an email.thanks.
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| Re: Tide by <~> |
14-Sep-02/11:15 PM |
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I liked it very much like your "Falling".I sent you an email.thanks.
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