on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 6:11 AM
I like your original poems and it's another one.S3 and last were wonderful.9
on Tears by Birdman42s
8 Sep 2002, 10:43 PM
your poems are all good but this one still better
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2002, 9:10 AM
GOTT!what a dangerous poem!but the blue eyes!ha!6
on Like and Unlike by Christof
12 Sep 2002, 8:57 AM
Hi Christof!what have you done with your"Preconceptual"?you had such a poem or I dreamed it?just then I wanted to read it again and found it disapeared!It was very good!H'm!please tell me the reason
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 Sep 2002, 8:11 AM
Come on,Dark-angel!I read it for your sake and enjoyed it.reconcile?8
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2002, 11:58 AM
It's good like always christof!"under skin of veins/and skeins of nerves/cleaving close/to bone like desperation".quite professional.liked it more than others.10
on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2002, 10:50 PM
Not very poetical,just a point to be considered.(you know how to write poetry so you'll succeed)
on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2002, 10:53 PM
The end was the most interesting.6
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2002, 1:13 AM
Original!I needed to read some poem like this!thanks beloved!(no impertinance was meant!)8/10
on sensitivity as ruination by baubble
9 Sep 2002, 8:31 AM
(you've misspelled hollow)liked it.it was a heart-felt pem.you've expressed yourself deeply.8/10
on A story of forever by tandem
9 Sep 2002, 9:09 AM
liked very much.9.last stanza esp
on The Battle by Birdman42s
8 Sep 2002, 10:27 PM
(to grin,i think?)liked it7
on In my heart by Birdman42s
8 Sep 2002, 10:33 PM
the 2 last sentences sound clumsy when read together.just a suggestion"and my heart's will be forever"or any way you like to cahange it.simple and tender.
on Untitled # 93 by nightii
8 Sep 2002, 10:36 PM
"graceful desperation and rusting reflection"are very good!Bravo!7/0
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2002, 8:08 AM
Peaceful indeed!Bravo8/10!well sure 10!like it perfectly!
on Like and Unlike by Christof
12 Sep 2002, 7:54 AM
the last images paint an unforgottable picture.9
on Torn... by loneshadow29
12 Sep 2002, 7:50 AM
Dark indeed!7