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Tears (Free verse) by Birdman42s
Tears If tears could build a stairway, and memories were a lane, I would walk right up to heaven to bring you home again. No farewell words were spoken no time to say goodbye, you were gone before I knew it, and only God knows why. My heart still aches in sadness and secret tears still flow, what it meant to lose you, no one will ever know. DLB

Up the ladder: You are a divider
Down the ladder: Who am I?

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.75
Weighted score: 7.0104113
Overall Rank: 69
Posted: September 8, 2002 6:16 PM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2002 6:16 PM PDT
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[9] vulcan @ 80.242.3.96 | 8-Sep-02/10:43 PM | Reply
your poems are all good but this one still better
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