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Free verse № 13771

In my heart

by Birdman42s

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

In My Heart Could I ever forget your sparkling eyes, or the way you brightened each day, or your smile which is etched in my memories, So you are never far away? Could I ever forget those priceless moments? The answer of course is never. For you were apart of my lift for a long time, but you'll be apart of my heart forever. DLB

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[6] vulcan 8-Sep-02/10:33 PM Reply
the 2 last sentences sound clumsy when read together.just a suggestion"and my heart's will be forever"or any way you like to cahange it.simple and tender.
[6] vulcan › vulcan 8-Sep-02/10:41 PM Reply
Sorry!forgot 'you' in my suggestion"and my heart's you'll be forever"