Re: a comment on Dan by dougsoderstrom	25-Jul-04/1:07 PM
In what way then do you walk in his shoes, or should I say four-inch open-toed heels with ankle straps?
Re: a comment on Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT	25-Jul-04/12:51 PM
It's for reasons like this that you might want to stick with turtle.
Re: a comment on Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina	25-Jul-04/7:51 AM
Might be more true to the title and the intent I want to show, maybe less provocative. dunno. I'll think about it.
Re: Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT	24-Jul-04/4:14 PM
Technically terapin burgers. Funny.
Re: a comment on Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina	24-Jul-04/4:10 PM
Respect for the ones who made doing this possible and who might rather chuckle at the act than to look at the bottom side of flowers.
Re: a comment on Dan by dougsoderstrom	24-Jul-04/2:29 PM
Are we talking about the dame Dan?
Re: Hidden by QuirkyWonder	24-Jul-04/2:28 PM
I there are also other explanations, but I'll accept yours.
Re: A Mothers Heart by TAMARAG67	23-Jul-04/6:52 PM
Good thought, but too cliche. Could use some banter between baby and adult.
Re: Dan by dougsoderstrom	23-Jul-04/6:49 PM
Now this is good, provocative. I like Dan, whom I didn't, but do, in spite of his shoe.
Re: a comment on The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom	23-Jul-04/3:19 PM
I'm referring to your recent responses to comments.
Re: Flying things by INTRANSIT	23-Jul-04/3:11 PM
Try "fight" in line 9
Re: the secret language of clouds by fair12	23-Jul-04/3:04 PM
Some good lines here and a good thought. I'd cull a few words - "though" in line 5, "over" in verse 4, speech
Re: The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom	23-Jul-04/2:52 PM
I thought You wanted to rise above this sort of wallow. And going back this far to take another dip. Disgusting.
Re: Wholes: the year in reflection by impert&ent	23-Jul-04/10:34 AM
As you slip Between the lines - good line.
Re: Flying things by INTRANSIT	22-Jul-04/11:42 AM
I haven't read Carl Sandburg's poem and should before commenting, but I had to laugh at the wrecking ball because it's what I think I need around here half the time and then say, no it's the other half I stay for.
Re: a comment on Summer by Dovina	22-Jul-04/11:31 AM
Thanks. Maybe like the rumble of an 18-wheeler?
Re: Feeling Like A Mask by wilco	20-Jul-04/2:39 PM
Might want to scratch "Feeling Like" from the title. "I’m masquerading as someone who loves you." "Not technically lies." Good lines.
Re: a comment on Poor Unwritten Rabbit by Dovina	20-Jul-04/10:15 AM
Illumine sounded sweeter. I think they mean the same.
Re: I dreamt a white Black widow by INTRANSIT	20-Jul-04/9:41 AM
Funny! Women rule.
Re: a comment on Poor Unwritten Rabbit by Dovina	20-Jul-04/9:12 AM
BTW Thank you