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I dreamt a white Black widow

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Jul 2004 · 3 comments

She sits like accuracy on top of a cherry wood desk. Unvulgar in calf boots and Fedora, Her ranging eyes looking out from her purpled cubicle. I step in, putting my hands to her hips. She pulls me tight and whispers cockrings and machineguns in my ear, then releases me and I fall back a fifty pound spent casing.

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[9] Dovina 20-Jul-04/9:41 AM Reply
Funny! Women rule.
[10] edpeterson 20-Jul-04/9:44 AM Reply
where da white womens be at???

excellent cockrings and machineguns...staccato whispers.
[n/a] <~> 8-Oct-04/10:54 AM Reply
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