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the secret language of clouds (Free verse) by fair12
today the sky turned
five shades of grey
with bone white fingers, cutting
clarity from our sight
as though a scythe through the air
the wind became a poem
with bending branches, swaying
words in a world of once spoken truths,
scratching voices meant for whispers
in the late afternoon
of Wednesdayâs dying light
we starred blankly as rain
smeared over windows, each drop
a sentence running
away with our words
like five year-olds we became fascinated
by our inability to see
the great green world beyond, watched
as darkness flanked the earths edges
and sighed at blueâs attempt at speach
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Posted: July 23, 2004 12:27 PM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2004 12:27 PM PDT
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