Re: a comment on Barflies and Bombshells by wilco	31-Jul-04/4:07 PM
Even a black widow is great fun for awhile.
Re: a comment on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	31-Jul-04/3:46 PM
I see, you are gigantically tasteless and of undetermined sexuality. Thank you for sharing.
Re: a comment on The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx	31-Jul-04/3:29 PM
You are so kind.
Re: a comment on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	31-Jul-04/3:09 PM
Thanks.
Re: The Chaos by Prince of Void	31-Jul-04/2:07 PM
A good idea, but not strongly presented. I'd like to see the ending be more definitive. I became a mystic They are just consumers Led me to find myself Trying to keep the decaying day away As the people become more hollow
Re: I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62	31-Jul-04/1:19 PM
"tears Flowed like a river bed"??? Riverbeds don't flow, and most of the other analogies don't work either. they seem only there for the rhymes.
Re: The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx	31-Jul-04/12:54 PM
Please check spelling before submitting. Thank you.
Re: You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom	31-Jul-04/10:30 AM
Not a new thought, but a good one. Not really a haiku either, but a good way to live.
Re: a comment on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	31-Jul-04/10:20 AM
I respect your Christian position on this, and would respect it even more if you would try to see the relationship between the two columns or sides of the poem, and try to see how thinking in the present aids in understanding. Thank you.
Re: a comment on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	31-Jul-04/10:16 AM
If I have aggravated misunderstanding, then I have succeeded. If I have shown two conversations about the same thing, then I have succeeded more. Thanks.
Re: a comment on Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina	30-Jul-04/6:43 PM
And a repecctful kinda fun that some might call wierd, which made it all the more fun. Thanks.
Re: a comment on Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	30-Jul-04/6:40 PM
Thanks, I think, depending on what mess you mean.
Re: Perfection by lilshorrtee	29-Jul-04/11:09 AM
Pleas check spelling and grammar before submitting. Thank you.
Re: a comment on Barflies and Bombshells by wilco	29-Jul-04/11:08 AM
It will drop because he expects it to drop.
Re: The bad news is his bones are like rubber by Venus	28-Jul-04/11:06 AM
I like enough shrouding to let me draw my own conclisions, but I don't like riddles, and this reads like a riddle.
Re: Barflies and Bombshells by wilco	28-Jul-04/10:52 AM
May it never drop, if not from this barfly, then some other. Cheers
Re: Cranberry shoes by INTRANSIT	27-Jul-04/12:47 PM
The carbon dating thing throws me because it dates dead tissue, which is ok except that I wonder why you bring it up, except to compare it with what he was about to say regarding the stars. Otherwise a good read.
Re: Wake Up by unouluvme	27-Jul-04/12:33 PM
Wish I knew what your are talking about. It sounds like it might be interseting.
Re: a comment on Dan by dougsoderstrom	25-Jul-04/4:13 PM
When walking on grass, keep your weight on the toes.
Re: Dirty Heaven by SupremeDreamer	25-Jul-04/1:39 PM
Good rant, if a bit long. May Breaonna make it to Pasadena and JJ's where she can get dinner and drink for three bucks.