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Perfection (Free verse) by lilshorrtee
When negatives vibes seem to fade
you let your worries drift away
when your posative the sun will shine
for never again will you cross the line
when the world seems to make a complete rotation
when not a spoken word needs translation
when our souls cease to be divided
with our hearts forever collided
when all is peaceful and serene
for once your greatful it's not a dream
wishing life would stop for this one moment
when everything is perfect
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6325
Posted: July 28, 2004 11:52 AM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2004 11:52 AM PDT
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