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Free verse № 109262

Perfection

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Jul 2004 · 1 comment

When negatives vibes seem to fade you let your worries drift away when your posative the sun will shine for never again will you cross the line when the world seems to make a complete rotation when not a spoken word needs translation when our souls cease to be divided with our hearts forever collided when all is peaceful and serene for once your greatful it's not a dream wishing life would stop for this one moment when everything is perfect

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