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Perfection (Free verse) by lilshorrtee
When negatives vibes seem to fade you let your worries drift away when your posative the sun will shine for never again will you cross the line when the world seems to make a complete rotation when not a spoken word needs translation when our souls cease to be divided with our hearts forever collided when all is peaceful and serene for once your greatful it's not a dream wishing life would stop for this one moment when everything is perfect

Up the ladder: Vain Moment
Down the ladder: Night song of Pattaya

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6280
Posted: July 28, 2004 11:52 AM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2004 11:52 AM PDT
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[4] Dovina @ 205.142.108.5 | 29-Jul-04/11:09 AM | Reply
Pleas check spelling and grammar before submitting. Thank you.
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