Re: Certain circles by INTRANSIT	7-Aug-04/11:10 AM
A brief epoch and a little didactic. Good "who's" "weathered face"
Re: a comment on Missing Grand Miss. by timtonio	6-Aug-04/1:20 PM
Why not put your reply under the comment you're replying to, like this. I fail to see a mature person saying "All of our days we vie to be one of the elitist few."
Re: The Glow of the Sun by QuirkyWonder	6-Aug-04/10:55 AM
Ah, to be young again, or old again, still lying on the beach. Not bad.
Re: a comment on Solid Understanding by Dovina	6-Aug-04/10:49 AM
The second verse seems to have everyone vexed. Rewrite in progress.
Re: a comment on Solid Understanding by Dovina	6-Aug-04/10:48 AM
1) “simplest” yes, thanks. 3) Could change to “none of it sounds true,” 4) The fear is mine, not his, and I should make that clear. Thanks.
Re: a comment on Solid Understanding by Dovina	6-Aug-04/10:46 AM
I hate the ending when a solid piece of intuition or emotional understanding so sputters my words that he turns away. But I do need to say it more understandably. Thanks.
Re: A Beautiful Pain by timtonio	5-Aug-04/4:49 PM
A good thought. "a future foretold" tends to spoil the intrigue that's otherwise there.
Re: a comment on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	5-Aug-04/10:46 AM
Thanks. To the instincts of traveler and poet.
Re: Brats by D. $ Fontera	4-Aug-04/5:34 PM
We're all brats, aren't we?
Re: Mike Pike!! by DR Limerick	4-Aug-04/5:30 PM
Now mike is a collossal tripe.
Re: Marina by INTRANSIT	4-Aug-04/5:25 PM
Sailboat waiting to sail or sailing though foggy. Like it. Try "Peace that Passes Understanding" again and see if my explanation makes sense. I'd like to know. Very little action on Poemranker today. I mean by users who don't call themselves "not Dovina."
Re: Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw	3-Aug-04/12:25 PM
The votes and comments here tell us something, don't they?
Re: a comment on I Love You Mildred Rogers No Matter What by cat	3-Aug-04/11:06 AM
Yeah, I only saw the surface of it, if that's what you meant. Too vague for me.
Re: Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat	3-Aug-04/11:03 AM
An actual observation, no doubt. But it lacks and more than observation, nothing really to provoke thoutht. "there were only two bus. . . "
Re: My two cents by hobojo	3-Aug-04/10:54 AM
This is good, but what are Cylindrical Errs? The last verse seems superfluous.
Re: May I? by cedand1	3-Aug-04/10:49 AM
I suppose if I did not relate to this in my own experience I would pass it off as another ramble by another crazy poet. But since I do, it's enlightening.
Re: nice day by New Life Drug	3-Aug-04/10:42 AM
Quite good, really, except for the last line, which because I'm accused of being a prude, I will say doesn't fit here.
Re: He Will Be Loved by eyrbare	3-Aug-04/10:38 AM
I like this quite a bit. Try a line break after "Sharon." Falling for roses and stabbed with barbs is quite nice, reqlly, and recognized.
Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717	3-Aug-04/10:30 AM
-=Dark_Angel=- with or without P.I. embodied.
Re: Innocence by QuirkyWonder	3-Aug-04/10:28 AM
"waiting to be wished upon." Cute.