Re: On Reading by the_poetess	14-Mar-05/6:56 AM
Some good thoughts, but overwritten. How can you predict what you will never do?
Re: a wonderful life by crooked_smile	14-Mar-05/6:53 AM
Verse 2 poses an interesting question.
Re: history by whispern_smoke_wisp	14-Mar-05/6:50 AM
The past. History is just a sample, not fate.
Re: Delusions Of A Peaceful Place by Stacy Stewart	14-Mar-05/6:47 AM
I can imagine it. Good title.
Re: a comment on The Because Collection by INTRANSIT	14-Mar-05/6:40 AM
Admittedly, some are clever reversals, but why so many, and for what?
Re: a comment on How to make a suicide bomber by Caducus	14-Mar-05/6:31 AM
Agreed. I don't know why you thought I thought otherwise, except of course that I'm just naturally a dullard and embrace anything bad or "AMERICA = NAUGHTY" or whatever. Go ahead, use me for your soapbox.
Re: The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite	13-Mar-05/10:00 PM
And glasses keep the bugs outa your eyes while cycling. I've been told that in the past, which is the same as "I've been told that."
Re: The Because Collection by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-05/9:55 PM
Because you've gone bonkers or drunk.
Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-05/9:51 PM
No, it's directed at me. You don't even have to consider the colors or the indentation to know that.
Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-05/9:49 PM
Next question: Is "stupid" a noun, as in a name for your silliness, or an adjective, the way to describe it?
Re: a comment on Enchanted Place by Beyond_Dreams	13-Mar-05/6:41 AM
zodiac is the dim, you dim. You've misplaced your comment again, distracted no doubt by the pretty pink sheathes.
Re: a comment on Sauvignon by Dovina	13-Mar-05/6:37 AM
Very funny pun - legs. hahahaha hahahahaha hahahahaha
Re: a comment on Sauvignon by Dovina	13-Mar-05/6:35 AM
When deceived, deceive. And eye for an eye. But it’s fantasy really - getting even. Might as well laugh and write a poem.
Re: a comment on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina	13-Mar-05/6:24 AM
What a lumbering flourish of hackneyed circumlocution. Never have I seen so little said in so many unsupported words.
Re: The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle	12-Mar-05/5:46 PM
I rarely say this because it's a bum rule, but Show, don't Tell.
Re: Deep Thought by Dreammaker1024	12-Mar-05/5:44 PM
Not really a poem.
Re: wishes by the_poetess	12-Mar-05/11:32 AM
I don't think anybody gets you. I've read the comments and see you as much younger, but like me, healthy, smart and bored. Jumping off a bridge and can't even drown. So what can I tell you except to find somepalce to feel needed and keep plugging away at this; it has potential.
Re: a comment on Enchanted Place by Beyond_Dreams	12-Mar-05/11:16 AM
You fooled me then.
Re: Girl of my Dreams??? by thepinkbunnyofdoom	12-Mar-05/11:15 AM
An interesting romance to follow as it winds through the ranker.
Re: Never Did You by Dreammaker1024	12-Mar-05/11:12 AM
Not really a poem, maybe a prose poem. To be a poem, it should be cleverly written, unususl, and touching to an uninformed reader.