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history (Free verse) by whispern_smoke_wisp
if history is doomed to repeat itself, then when I hear the eerie footsteps of time creeping up from behind me, if I turn my head to watch what is coming that is following me home, am I looking at the the past the present or the future

Down the ladder: Bread and blackthorns

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5844
Posted: March 13, 2005 11:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 13, 2005 11:17 AM PST
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[5] Dovina @ 12.72.10.229 | 14-Mar-05/6:50 AM | Reply
The past. History is just a sample, not fate.
[10] zodiac @ 212.118.11.13 | 14-Mar-05/9:53 PM | Reply
The past is dirtier and quite a bit more smelly; the future has flying cars and onepiece spandex suits for everybody.
[9] PoeticXTC @ 205.188.116.139 | 8-Jan-06/12:26 AM | Reply
lol, all of the above
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