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15-Jun-04/8:21 PM |
Very well done,but title may need to be changed.
I like it!
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15-Jun-04/8:27 PM |
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Keep trying you'll get it.Do not listen to "god's wife"!!
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| Re: Thin Blood by Rodavlas |
15-Jun-04/8:29 PM |
So graphic!I hope your o.k.
seriously.
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15-Jun-04/8:32 PM |
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Not bad - better than anything "god's wife" ever wrote!
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| Re: A Chance to Say Goodbye by TLRufener |
15-Jun-04/8:38 PM |
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I wish "god's wife" would read her own "poetry" a little more often,instead of dashing other's hope for being heard.
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| Re: Litany by zodiac |
15-Jun-04/8:52 PM |
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I checked your website out - wow -your music is worse than your sad attempt at prose!My ears are still bleeding!Please spare us, become a forest ranger or something!
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15-Jun-04/9:31 PM |
You are a much better critic than you are a writer!
Try polishing your skills as a critic and abandon writing completely!
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| Re: West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
15-Jun-04/9:33 PM |
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| Re: The Freemasons by Bachus |
16-Jun-04/7:35 PM |
Are you actually serious?What is this delirious drivel
supposed to be anyway?Does Elvis live in your trailer park?
Did he help you compose this daft hypothesis?
Though I rather enjoyed reading it.
Thanks
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17-Jun-04/12:18 PM |
Fairly funny,semi-clever.
Please pay no mind to zoddie's comment, as it is coming
from an artless underwit.I gave you a 7.
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18-Jun-04/11:50 AM |
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| Re: Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
23-Jun-04/2:24 PM |
I quite agree!You and your poetry are actualized shit.I understand the jest of your statement,but that's
no excuse to lower yourself to the same level.Besides
I highly doubt you know anything about the essence of
blackness, being the pasty scotsman you are.Good job jackass you created nine lines of artless, barbarous shit.
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| Re: Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer |
23-Jun-04/2:36 PM |
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How about "Go fuck yourself motherfucker,goddamn cunt-bitch-WHORE"? Brilliant!
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| Re: Thoughts Asunder by wilco |
23-Jun-04/7:02 PM |
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One of your best poems.-9-
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24-Jun-04/2:15 PM |
I'm still undicided on which is more painful to read,your monotonous prose or your heavy handed discounting of others.Oh well,like most of us here on
poemranker your quite graceless at both.
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| Re: 9/11 Fareinheit Missed by peaceseeker |
26-Jun-04/1:39 PM |
This poem is irreproachable in regards to it's softness
and somewhat unhindered intellection of innocence.
I like the feeling behind your words,finespun,yet basic and graceful.
Polish it up just a half a hair and it would be a 10 and a half.
Either or well done.
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| Re: Captain Napkin Starring In "The Passion Of Napkin" by horus8 |
28-Jun-04/4:29 PM |
How bout flush this poem instead.
Sincerely:(
Pale Jizzbomb
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| Re: I CANNOT FUCKAT2POEMS by daggatolar |
10-Aug-04/5:49 PM |
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10-Aug-04/5:54 PM |
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I like everything save the last two lines - change 'em up and suprise me.
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| Re: i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus |
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