on I CANNOT FUCKAT2POEMS by daggatolar
10 Aug 2004, 5:49 PM
Bravo - well done.
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2004, 5:54 PM
I like everything save the last two lines - change 'em up and suprise me.
on Captain Napkin Starring In "The Passion Of Napkin" by horus8
28 Jun 2004, 4:29 PM
How bout flush this poem instead.
Sincerely:(
Pale Jizzbomb
Sincerely:(
Pale Jizzbomb
on 9/11 Fareinheit Missed by peaceseeker
26 Jun 2004, 1:39 PM
This poem is irreproachable in regards to it's softness
and somewhat unhindered intellection of innocence.
I like the feeling behind your words,finespun,yet basic and graceful.
Polish it up just a half a hair and it would be a 10 and a half.
Either or well done.
and somewhat unhindered intellection of innocence.
I like the feeling behind your words,finespun,yet basic and graceful.
Polish it up just a half a hair and it would be a 10 and a half.
Either or well done.
on some deleted poem
24 Jun 2004, 2:15 PM
I'm still undicided on which is more painful to read,your monotonous prose or your heavy handed discounting of others.Oh well,like most of us here on
poemranker your quite graceless at both.
poemranker your quite graceless at both.
on Thoughts Asunder by wilco
23 Jun 2004, 7:02 PM
One of your best poems.-9-
on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer
23 Jun 2004, 2:24 PM
I quite agree!You and your poetry are actualized shit.I understand the jest of your statement,but that's
no excuse to lower yourself to the same level.Besides
I highly doubt you know anything about the essence of
blackness, being the pasty scotsman you are.Good job jackass you created nine lines of artless, barbarous shit.
no excuse to lower yourself to the same level.Besides
I highly doubt you know anything about the essence of
blackness, being the pasty scotsman you are.Good job jackass you created nine lines of artless, barbarous shit.
on Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer
23 Jun 2004, 2:36 PM
How about "Go fuck yourself motherfucker,goddamn cunt-bitch-WHORE"? Brilliant!
on i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus
10 Sep 2004, 11:01 PM
Boring.
on some deleted poem
18 Jun 2004, 11:50 AM
Kudos!
on some deleted poem
17 Jun 2004, 12:18 PM
Fairly funny,semi-clever.
Please pay no mind to zoddie's comment, as it is coming
from an artless underwit.I gave you a 7.
Please pay no mind to zoddie's comment, as it is coming
from an artless underwit.I gave you a 7.
on The Freemasons by Bachus
16 Jun 2004, 7:35 PM
Are you actually serious?What is this delirious drivel
supposed to be anyway?Does Elvis live in your trailer park?
Did he help you compose this daft hypothesis?
Though I rather enjoyed reading it.
Thanks
supposed to be anyway?Does Elvis live in your trailer park?
Did he help you compose this daft hypothesis?
Though I rather enjoyed reading it.
Thanks
on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco
15 Jun 2004, 9:33 PM
Not so bad.
on some deleted poem
15 Jun 2004, 8:32 PM
Not bad - better than anything "god's wife" ever wrote!
on some deleted poem
15 Jun 2004, 8:21 PM
Very well done,but title may need to be changed.
I like it!
I like it!
on some deleted poem
15 Jun 2004, 8:27 PM
Keep trying you'll get it.Do not listen to "god's wife"!!
on Thin Blood by Rodavlas
15 Jun 2004, 8:29 PM
So graphic!I hope your o.k.
seriously.
seriously.
on A Chance to Say Goodbye by TLRufener
15 Jun 2004, 8:38 PM
I wish "god's wife" would read her own "poetry" a little more often,instead of dashing other's hope for being heard.
on some deleted poem
15 Jun 2004, 9:31 PM
You are a much better critic than you are a writer!
Try polishing your skills as a critic and abandon writing completely!
Try polishing your skills as a critic and abandon writing completely!