poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Doug (41-60)

Comments byDoug, 41–60 back. Include replies

on tripped on an eggo by horus9 15 Jun 2004, 7:26 PM
WTF?
on Dealer (a senyru) by Mona Lisa 15 Jun 2004, 7:27 PM
Well done!
on some deleted poem 15 Jun 2004, 7:30 PM
You have a point Shin Shuu,but the poem should be for you,not publication.
on Girl and a Drugstore Novel by snacktime 15 Jun 2004, 7:43 PM
Better than anything "god's wife" could dream of putting on paper!Don't let his or her self loathing stop you from self expression.Keep writing how or what you feel.
on some deleted poem 15 Jun 2004, 7:55 PM
Not bad at all.I give you a seven.

P.S."god's wife" please stop being so great and wise.
It makes you sound so sad and lonely.



on You can seize my smile by Prince of Void 15 Jun 2004, 8:10 PM
Not bad,but you need to use a more compact, yet broader range of words,maybe something that flows just a tad better.And by the way never take "god's wife's" sad caption as being an actual person's opinion.
Keep putting your words on paper!
on some deleted poem 15 Jun 2004, 8:17 PM
Yes, the first three lines are not needed,but still pretty decent.


P.S. "god's wife" is a terrible and lowley critic!
on Fighting before bed by zodiac 14 Jun 2004, 12:50 PM
crass nomenclature,wow you are such a wordy gimp.
on In love as in war by zodiac 14 Jun 2004, 1:20 PM
Jimmy,maybe write about what you know,instead of this sad little fantasy of jerking off a man in uniform.
It seems clear you know nothing of war or love(or writing a decent poem).Oh and your music sucks as well.
on Heat by Shardik 11 Jun 2004, 6:27 PM
I was asleep by the third line!Very lame.
on Poet by Shardik 11 Jun 2004, 6:22 PM
A sad little poem about a sad little boy,still afraid to grow up,still afraid to love a woman after 23 years,so sad.Almost made me cry.
on It was... by Shardik 11 Jun 2004, 6:48 PM
Wow,I thought you could'nt be worse-proved me wrong again!
on The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco 11 Jun 2004, 6:55 PM
Godswife why are you so bitter? you really need to get a life outside of lame internet sites...really!
on some deleted poem 11 Jun 2004, 7:28 PM
I'm a degenerate fool.
on some deleted poem 11 Jun 2004, 7:47 PM
Could it be any longer?My God!
on Bugs by INTRANSIT 11 Jun 2004, 11:55 AM
pretty good job there INTRANSIT.
on Turdzilla by Shardik 11 Jun 2004, 2:57 PM
Childish yet funny.I think you smoke too much weed.
on Shamefaced by Doug 11 Jun 2004, 2:28 PM
How many people visit this site anyway? Like 3 a day?
Could somebody critique my poem please?
on The Pear Blossom Highway by Shardik 11 Jun 2004, 3:03 PM
smack dab in the middle-wow you are brilliant!
on some deleted poem 11 Jun 2004, 3:07 PM
You sure know your flowers!