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tripped on an eggo

Member since 2004 · Posted 15 Jun 2004 · Edited 16 Jun 2004 · 6 comments

i skipped the laughter when i walked out of the joint tripped on an eggo and thought it was my ego running like the eggs i ate for breakfast, but, nothing is quaint when it is quiet nothing is banging unless nudity is involved can't see shit unless it's there of course that's how life goes you know? i skipped the doo-dah and went on a ride with my joint to my lip and bacon in my lip spitting out fat like all cows of the world should do marley on the radio being a fag and my penis going limp every time i see a hooker here i am there i am who fucking cares about life anyway? it's just an annoyance, a multiple gunshot in the ear a headbanging retard on steroids and a fuckin' pussy-ass whore sucking my dick yeah, that's life, so fuck off!

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6 comments

[7] Doug 15-Jun-04/7:26 PM Reply
WTF?
[n/a] horus9 › Doug 16-Jun-04/11:09 AM Reply
FTW?
[2] wilco 15-Jun-04/7:39 PM Reply
How can you smoke a joint and call Bob Marley a fag?
[n/a] horus9 › wilco 16-Jun-04/11:09 AM Reply
Is not the question how can you not smoke a joint and call marley a fag?

Yes, I think it is.
[2] wilco › horus9 16-Jun-04/5:13 PM Reply
nope
[n/a] Bachus 16-Jun-04/5:40 PM Reply
D minor is the saddest chord.