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Heat (Free verse) by Shardik
Powdered bones and mirage
have turned my face away.
This heat, these lines, intersecting
ahead and behind my sun crawl.
Pale, then red to bronze, now brown
Blistering, peeling inside out and beyond
The dunes, sidewinders, mountains perpetually
unreachable, teasing me with safer shadow.
Back skeletal, knees sand papered down
to tendon and nerve. I serve the sky, a left
over lover long of nail and without time
A counter of clouds, a rain dancer on the verge...
Of thunder, or death without song.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5534
Posted: April 28, 2004 1:35 AM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2004 1:35 AM PDT
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Manatees bobbing in a display pool
somewhere in the heart of Vegas.