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Sonnet or Limerick? (Sonnet) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
You've cherry red cheeks and nice legs, Your eyes are like two pickled eggs, I've really succumbed, To your breasts so rotund, So won't you consent to some sex?

Up the ladder: Hunger 2
Down the ladder: Hmm...

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5538
Posted: October 18, 2003 5:07 AM PDT; Last modified: October 18, 2003 5:07 AM PDT
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[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 18-Oct-03/9:10 AM | Reply
SEE now that's a SONNET!

I knew you could do it.
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.235.144 > Shuushin | 18-Oct-03/6:13 PM | Reply
You are a complete sonnet Witney.
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Oct-03/3:13 PM | Reply
No, unless you get me a limo with a jello spa and women that shut up when told to... Oh and mai tais.
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.235.144 > horus8 | 18-Oct-03/6:16 PM | Reply
When I am (inevitably one day) a billionaire, I WILL have a jelly bath installed in my car. However, don't pretend you are from the New World with words such as "jello," I saw you use the word "quid" in some comment or other.
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