Re: Reasons by dancin_n_da_moonlite	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:07 PM
quite good
Re: the inner flame by crwncka1	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:06 PM
not too shabby
Re: Legless Insecurity by PoeticXTC	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:05 PM
I didn't like this.
Re: (no subject) by whispern_smoke_wisp	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:02 PM
I didn't really like this one
Re: I Heart You by Enkidu	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/6:53 PM
I really lied this poem. It was sweet and simple.
Re: An Understanding Woman by Dovina	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/6:49 PM
I really like this, it is quite powerful.
Re: MyEyes/Complicated by click64	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/6:45 PM
I have been there, trust me. This poem is a little confusing though.
Re: hurricane love by crwncka1	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/6:43 PM
I love the opening line, but then the poem kinda loses its power for me.
Re: An Understanding Woman by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	5-Feb-06/4:47 PM
Some men can break a woman's heart with surgical skill.
Re: Untitled by click64	Dovina 67.72.98.81	5-Feb-06/4:18 PM
A good outline for a poem, though a very common one. Practice unusual ways of saying it. Look for underlying truths, lies, beliefs that hinder your goals.
Re: can you sing me a song by richa	Dovina 67.72.98.81	5-Feb-06/3:38 PM
Why is it sad that the joyful reader cannot sing sweetest of all? It's too much to ask, so you must mean something else. To be a joyful reader is not wanton, unless you mean unproductive in the field of things read, like an appreciator of Tolstoy, for example. But I see no fault in that.
Re: a comment on I'm there by amanda_dcosta	richa 81.178.151.135	5-Feb-06/3:28 PM
bow'ls.
Re: Untitled by click64	richa 81.178.151.135	5-Feb-06/3:25 PM
The past does not matter. Unless you have crabs. Then it matters. :(
Re: a comment on A Walk in the Park by Dovina	Dovina 67.72.98.81	5-Feb-06/3:07 PM
We were discussing the NIV and its reliability as a translation. Also, we were talking about who the writer claims to be. You've raised another interesting subject, perhaps better left to another thread.
Re: a comment on Temporary moments by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 213.207.232.22	5-Feb-06/6:59 AM
u are right .. a good choice ..thanx
Re: a comment on A Walk in the Park by Dovina	zodiac 216.67.6.136	4-Feb-06/11:34 PM
I got lost. Did you agree that son of David almost certainly doesn't mean 'in the first generation after David' (as Christ, for example was a Son of David, and not even literally so, since Joseph, his connection to David, wasn't his real father)? Also, that 'King of Jerusalem' probably doesn't mean a literal king of Jerusalem or, at least, it means a displaced heir during one of the exiles? If not, for shame.
Re: a comment on I'm there by amanda_dcosta	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	4-Feb-06/7:29 PM
Should have listed it as a glosa poem then so people would know the first line wasn't yours. If you think you can turn around hundreds of years of negetive usage for the word creep then my hat is off to you.
Re: consider the following by crwncka1	click64 81.178.103.94	4-Feb-06/4:13 PM
A man can write a poem beautifully. As shown by you.
Re: The Rose by Queen of Tease	click64 81.178.103.94	4-Feb-06/4:12 PM
WOW
Re: a waste of time by hendrimike	amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.44	4-Feb-06/10:40 AM
This sounded more like lyrics to me. And anyway, how old are you now.... that you're already contemplating on your life. a waste of time is an apt topic for you theme. I personally feel you should have given it more thought on the presentation. Not enough drunken language in it. Only description of where. Set the scene a bit cause the entire theme is a 'binge'.