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I Heart You (Free verse) by Enkidu I love you you you
You you in my deepest
heart of hearts
When all the wind
And all despair
Have clouded up
The heavy air
I'll watch you there
To love love love
You when you stand
Afeared
And kiss kiss kiss
You in the rain
And hold you close and dear
Come to me and
Love love love to
Never ending heights
And I will love love
Love thee
Far far long
Into the night
Up the ladder:
I'm walking thorough void
Down the ladder:
Spirit In a Temple
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Posted: February 5, 2006 10:38 AM PST; Last modified: February 5, 2006 10:38 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7357 Comments:
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Angelicasassy @ 72.40.4.69
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5-Feb-06/6:53 PM
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I really lied this poem. It was sweet and simple.
Does the narrator have Parkinson's.
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