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Untitled (Free verse) by click64
Been there and back, but it doesnât help,
It just stirs up things in my head â like a shit stirrer.
It hurts me so real bad, Iâm cut up inside and out.
But you lot donât see.
All you see is this little Asian girl, cooking, cleaning.
Waiting to be taken away by some ungrateful dickhead.
You donât see beyond my little shell.
I long for someone to know and understand
I long to be taken away from this life.
The pain gets harder every-day.
I want to be gone from every-thing and everyone.
To somewhere where no-one knows me or my past.
You know Iâm not the person you think I am.
So it gets even harder.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11923
Posted: February 4, 2006 3:59 PM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2006 3:59 PM PST
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