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This chaotic mind (Free verse) by Bobjim What I'd give for an organized mind,
Instead of this chaotic kind.
It never recalls the simplest fact,
There's nothing but trouble and plenty of that.
Common sense there's none to be seen,
Only chaos and it reigns supreme.
A thought one minute, forgotten the next.
Tis a problem with which I'm often vexed.
It wanders free and out of control,
It will get me one day in a hell of a hole.
Up the ladder:
If You Knew
Down the ladder:
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Posted: December 21, 2004 2:46 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2004 2:46 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.72186 Overall Rank: 11933 Comments:
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It seems like you're mind's pretty organized if it can hammer on that one point 10 rhyming lines. Or is it just that you'd forgotten you'd written the previous two each time?