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Free verse № 72175

The Velvet Purse of the Universe (The Witch of Raven St.)

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Oct 2003 · 3 comments

Wondered always about the universe hidden within a velvet purse belonging to the old woman that lives on Raven Street. Rumors exist- a witch full of sin. She carries her baggage- a heavy curse, annoyed that another day must begin, and regrets becoming a nurse. Stars and galaxies drift among the lipstick, cheap peach blush, and toilet perfume breathing its quiet sighs- shaken as veined legs rush to their final destination. The temple of death, decay, and stifled mumbling- Doctor always has the last say, her suggestions and opinions pushed aside. Only silent walls stand by her side as she trudges through the day. In the end she is equal, since she too searches for the lost key that floats in the universe of her stuffed velvet purse. Frustration and broken dreams await her- along with curling smoke warm vodka and senseless chatter in the singles bar of failure.

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[6] Bill Z Bub 27-Oct-03/5:03 PM Reply
I loved the title, but was disappointed when it turned out to be an actual purse. I have a filthy filthy mind.
[n/a] Y2kSlamPoet › Bill Z Bub 27-Oct-03/5:55 PM Reply
oi, tsk, no worries bill, im sick in the head myself.. but i admit, i never had an inkling of what you thought the purse was sposed to be....

BUT NOW I DO! you dirty ole man. shame on you! heh.
[n/a] razorgrin › Bill Z Bub 28-Oct-03/9:09 AM Reply
I was too. I pout now.