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Free verse № 50044

the inner flame

by crwncka1

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 May 2003 · 5 comments

my flame within my flame within starts with my mind from there it goes down though my heart all the way to the depth of my soul for it gives my drive for it gives my desire for it gives my creative sense for it gives my life it always grows stonger stonger just like the rays of sunlight as the sun rises upon the dawn sky my inner flame burns today like the noontime sun in the sky with it are thoughts thoughts of love for what is life without love life without love is just nothing nothingness i could say for it is love that has gives me life today for it was love that gave me life that must not be forgotten i remind myself so with that in mind from this day fourth i will live my life in the wholeness that is love for today i have changed changed for the better for once i was lost now ive found meaning in life the one greatest meaning of all for it is love i will love from the inside love from the heart love from the soul for i will live my life with love

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-May-03/5:03 PM Reply
Good grief! If this so-called "inner flame" had anything to do with the enormously long chain of wrong thoughts you must have been thinking in order to produce a poeme as stultifyingly cack as this one, then it should immediately be snuffed out with a giant turnip.

rice / 10
[n/a] Shardik › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-May-03/7:44 PM Reply
Using my plush and painstakingly monitored produce section to vegetate novices is flattering, but strickly forbidden, but if you would like to touch my Kale with your brittle mite invested down feathers to test it's spring go right ahead, but i need my turnips to combat the Sars in my hall closet, thanks.
[n/a] Shardik 23-May-03/7:45 PM Reply
But do you have doves nesting in your bat cave?
[n/a] crwncka1 › Shardik 24-May-03/9:33 PM Reply
your interest in my work i find flattering.... i got a few ill pull outta my ass0r just for you... <evil grin>
[5] Angelicasassy 5-Feb-06/7:06 PM Reply
not too shabby