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the inner flame (Free verse) by crwncka1
my flame within
my flame within starts with my mind
from there it goes down though my heart
all the way to the depth of my soul
for it gives my drive
for it gives my desire
for it gives my creative sense
for it gives my life
it always grows stonger
stonger just like the rays of sunlight
as the sun rises
upon the dawn sky
my inner flame burns today
like the noontime sun in the sky
with it are thoughts
thoughts of love
for what is life without love
life without love is just nothing
nothingness i could say
for it is love that has gives me life today
for it was love that gave me life
that must not be forgotten i remind myself
so with that in mind
from this day fourth
i will live my life
in the wholeness that is love
for today i have changed
changed for the better
for once i was lost
now ive found meaning in life
the one greatest meaning of all
for it is love
i will love from the inside
love from the heart
love from the soul
for i will live my life with love
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Posted: May 23, 2003 4:47 PM PDT; Last modified: May 23, 2003 4:47 PM PDT
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