Re: Devil's Deal by kaoriliveshere	Zoe 84.13.19.254	6-Jul-06/12:00 PM
Nice sentiment here. Have you thought about putting it into a rhyming form?
Re: a comment on Bedlam Bazaar by Zoe	Zoe 84.13.19.254	6-Jul-06/5:45 AM
Thanks so much. I said other because I don't think that it really is free verse, more like syllabics - perhaps we should get a category for that kind of poetry?
Re: a comment on Bedlam Bazaar by Zoe	Zoe 84.13.19.254	6-Jul-06/4:28 AM
Thanks all for your interesting comments. I was wondering if I should leave out the Welsh translation entirely. Then it would just be a puzzle?
Re: a comment on A Boy Without Rain by D. $ Fontera	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.184	5-Jul-06/11:57 PM
Lol. Fair enough.
Re: a comment on A Boy Without Rain by D. $ Fontera	D. $ Fontera 71.208.115.199	5-Jul-06/8:54 PM
Periods are overrated, and their absence is not nearly as annoying as ridiculous abbreviations such as Pls.
Re: A man’s life (My Life) by lol	lol 202.156.6.76	5-Jul-06/8:28 PM
pls comment
Re: A Boy Without Rain by D. $ Fontera	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.184	5-Jul-06/8:18 PM
A nice theme, there, and I like the last four lines.... Pls punctuate. It's like I have to re read to get the right tone and flow of words.
Re: Patio 95 by ecargo	wilco 24.92.74.122	5-Jul-06/8:05 PM
Damn, I really like this and don't even know why.
Re: a comment on The Angle of your Downfall by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 71.208.115.199	5-Jul-06/8:04 PM
Curiouser and curiouser is a reference to Alice in Wonderland. I'd like to think that falling is one of my more consistent themes and this seemed quite appropriate.
Re: wait and see by hendrimike	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.184	5-Jul-06/7:59 PM
Not bad.
Re: good to see you by hendrimike	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.184	5-Jul-06/7:57 PM
Don't tell that no one's actually voted and commented here. So much for decency! I bet if you had to put one sick word into it you'd have probably got a dozen votes. To nit-pick, I'd like it if there were caps for the 'i'. I personally dislike seeing it in small letters, or maybe I'm too particular about that. It would also be nice if the beginning of verses were also caps. It gives a very disordered look without it, making your piece look less impressive. I'm trying to put a tune to it. Think one could fit in , so ... I could probably say that it's fairly good. The lyrics though, are a little common.
Re: canada day by Bill Z Bub	wilco 24.92.74.122	5-Jul-06/7:53 PM
The spacing works okay and there's something I like about it...still, just not overly impressed with this one Mr. Devil.
Re: a comment on Astronomy and Pharmaceuticals by wilco	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.184	5-Jul-06/7:46 PM
Any time. And all the best!
Re: a comment on Astronomy and Pharmaceuticals by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	5-Jul-06/7:43 PM
We actually recorded two others when we recorded "Elizabeth" but my lead guitarist is having a bout of retardation in coming up with his parts so they are still being recorded and mixed. Hopefully they;ll be up soon. I'm going to try to record this one and Dashboard Jesus sometime in the next couple of weeks. Dashboard Jesus will probably be just me and my guitar, a'la Death Cab for Cutie's "I Will Follow You Into the Dark". Thanks for your interest.
Re: a comment on Higher education by ecargo	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.184	5-Jul-06/7:41 PM
Are all guys demented?
Re: What? (Wot?) by ecargo	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.184	5-Jul-06/7:38 PM
Is this some kind of a Genesis sequel? .... day, light, word, air, birds, breath, ......???
Re: Astronomy and Pharmaceuticals by wilco	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.184	5-Jul-06/7:36 PM
P.S. Any new recordings recently?
Re: Astronomy and Pharmaceuticals by wilco	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.184	5-Jul-06/7:34 PM
Hey, wilco.... cool. When I read the title in the 'recent list', I was wondering what you'd sing about in astronomy and pharm... Sounds nostalgic to me, but good.
Re: O say, can you see? by Dovina	wilco 24.92.74.122	5-Jul-06/7:16 PM
Nice job there, D. I think you should take the "pop that cracker" line and turn it into a rap song.
Re: August 23, 1944 - 102 miles west of Paris by Ranger	wilco 24.92.74.122	5-Jul-06/7:08 PM
ace