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wait and see (Free verse) by hendrimike you won't wait to hear from me
you stand and watch me speak the seeds of truth
inside your jury of proof
it's a mess you need to see
a tiny game that you believed
i didn't love that world you gave
Up the ladder:
First Unborn Sun
Down the ladder:
Wish I was a better lover
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Posted: June 25, 2006 4:12 AM PDT; Last modified: June 25, 2006 4:12 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9525743 Overall Rank: 8817 Comments:
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amanda_dcosta @ 202.164.140.184
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5-Jul-06/7:59 PM
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Not bad.
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