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Hide (Free verse) by MarchingMan56
I find you there Hiding In the dark Away from the light surrounding you Your pristine face Shadows lie within There's rain behind your eyes So sad This haunting world Hide Why do you hide? I try to seek But you I cannot find Sweetness That's what you long Love It's what you fear Hiding Why must you hide? In this dark place Why do you feel you should? Hide Come out into the light Be who you are No one should be here Hiding Behind a mask Buried in such a sad world Break from the surface Please stop Hiding Don't be this way Be found Be loved No more Hide


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8826
Posted: February 23, 2005 11:09 AM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2005 11:09 AM PST
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 23-Feb-05/2:14 PM | Reply
The way you re-write cliche is... Cliche.
[n/a] MarchingMan56 @ 209.74.26.236 > horus8 | 24-Feb-05/3:36 PM | Reply
What's that supposed to mean???
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 > MarchingMan56 | 24-Feb-05/3:50 PM | Reply
Is that a trick question?
[n/a] MarchingMan56 @ 209.74.26.236 > horus8 | 24-Feb-05/5:16 PM | Reply
No. I don't understand what you mean. I CONFUSED!!!
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 > MarchingMan56 | 24-Feb-05/6:21 PM | Reply
Bummer.
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