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good to see you (Lyric) by hendrimike
and i can still look at you baby
even though ive been hurtin' too
and maybe you could free whats locked inside of me
the time has come for you to choose
im still laying side by side with you
and in that dream thats what I do
and ill wait till i wake to remember
i was lost, just a permanent pretender
and i remember you to well
and i saw that game you played
just admit you had the key baby
the prize was never far away
im still laying side by side with you
and in that dream thats what we do
and ill wait until i wake to remember
i was still just a permanent pretender
a permenant pretender
a lifetime to surrender
she overpowered when i cowered
i had lost all of my power
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9247
Posted: June 16, 2006 2:53 AM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2006 12:57 AM PDT
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To nit-pick, I'd like it if there were caps for the 'i'. I personally dislike seeing it in small letters, or maybe I'm too particular about that. It would also be nice if the beginning of verses were also caps. It gives a very disordered look without it, making your piece look less impressive.
I'm trying to put a tune to it. Think one could fit in , so ... I could probably say that it's fairly good. The lyrics though, are a little common.