Re: Arrival by Enkidu	Ranger 81.158.153.184	29-Aug-06/12:13 PM
Intriguing - anthrax?
Re: Pane Glass Lake by MacFrantic	Ranger 81.158.153.184	29-Aug-06/12:11 PM
I think 'beastial' should be 'bestial', but I could be wrong.
Re: Message sent by A_Dark_Calm	Ranger 81.158.153.184	29-Aug-06/12:08 PM
Nice enough, maybe it would benefit from 'computer' being replaced with something else that fits the more traditional feel? The only other question I have is about the final line - is it addressed directly to her/him? If so, it would work better with punctuation ("for, my love, I'll already be there"). If it's just that you've played with word order ("I'll already be there for my love") then it just feels a little strained currently. The rest of the poem is fine :-)
Re: Muff by Stephen Robins	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.213.50	29-Aug-06/10:59 AM
Very high class indeed. Who's Michael Stipe?
Re: On the subject of being poor by Stephen Robins	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.213.50	29-Aug-06/10:58 AM
This is a very nice poem. How true, how true. Why Colleen? I thought Sharon was more traditional.
Re: a comment on The Lady by -=??lilaznjen??=-	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:44 AM
When I said "genius", I made a typo. I meant "shit".
Re: Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:43 AM
Spoiled by the last line.
Re: MENSA's For Fags Like Me by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:42 AM
This is total shit. I just read 2 of your bits and they were OK but now you've descended to this shit I expect of people lile Horus8.
Re: Army Dock (Bangcock in July) (Free Curse) by Rug by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:41 AM
Had youn thought of drying out? 7/10 for freakery.
Re: Today I blew yet another Jew. by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:40 AM
This is a work of fucking genius. You are nearly as fine a writer as I am. 9/10 because I am feeling happy having just had a good wank.
Re: zimp by calliope	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:38 AM
total and utter garbage
Re: typography by calliope	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:37 AM
illiterate
Re: trained by calliope	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:37 AM
not very good - dreadful spelling and grammar. I'll be kind and give it 1/10.
Re: miss drunk muffet by calliope	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:36 AM
hilariously bad.
Re: just a thought by calliope	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:35 AM
Total crap.
Re: fastbreaker by calliope	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:35 AM
Pathetic.
Re: fish eye pie by calliope	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.206.129	29-Aug-06/7:34 AM
Had you thought of seeing a doctor? Especially one who believes in involuntary euthanasia?
Re: a comment on Quatrain by ALChemy	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	28-Aug-06/7:59 PM
Monsters rule would be a good title too. I just think really short poems like this often appear pretentious with a title.
Re: a comment on Quatrain by ALChemy	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	28-Aug-06/7:56 PM
I am flattered, thank you. I have always thought of myself as no more a poet than a leaf is a tree. It took me twice as long to get where you are now. You're way ahead of the game Ranger.
Re: a comment on Quatrain by ALChemy	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	28-Aug-06/7:51 PM
I wasn't going to post it but then some voice spoke to me like that of a goddess.