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fastbreaker (Free verse) by calliope
the dentist pulled a scrap of food from my teeth, and said, "This proves the theory you believe. At night there's pork chops and cadbury eggs floating through the air that you must surely chomp while you are fast asleep."

Up the ladder: dignity
Down the ladder: Me and the Darkness

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.8
Weighted score: 4.4993477
Overall Rank: 12822
Posted: August 28, 2005 7:40 PM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2005 7:40 PM PDT
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[2] wilco @ 66.61.101.130 | 30-Aug-05/7:00 PM | Reply
what?
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.206.129 | 29-Aug-06/7:35 AM | Reply
Pathetic.
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