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Free verse № 130217

fastbreaker

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Aug 2005 · 2 comments

the dentist pulled a scrap of food from my teeth, and said, "This proves the theory you believe. At night there's pork chops and cadbury eggs floating through the air that you must surely chomp while you are fast asleep."

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[2] wilco 30-Aug-05/7:00 PM Reply
what?
[0] Edna Sweetlove 29-Aug-06/7:35 AM Reply
Pathetic.