| Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp |
nentwined ::1 |
1-Nov-17/10:36 AM |
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It's a failure of the poem or myself, I don't care which. For me, this critique.
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| Re: a comment on Mother Mayday is Here to Stay (Stay Away!) by T. Jonathron Remp |
T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 |
1-Nov-17/10:36 AM |
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half.italian, totally.purposeless
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| Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp |
T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 |
1-Nov-17/10:30 AM |
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A message from all of us: Please understand something before you critique it.
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| Re: a comment on Making a Man by Christof |
Christof ::1 |
31-Oct-17/9:38 AM |
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Thanks Daniella. What brought you back to my poems after so long?
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| Re: Hollywood Is The Pits by Lenore |
T. Jonathron Remp ::1 |
17-Oct-17/3:20 PM |
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There is not one single causal strand of the many worlds multiverse that would not have a higher mean expected utility for its constituent beings in which this poem also exists -4-
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| Re: Pedophile by Lenore |
T. Jonathron Remp ::1 |
17-Oct-17/3:18 PM |
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If native plainsmen considered this poem to be a 12th elemental construct of reality, I would annihilate their genetic lineage entire with a hydrogen bomb -3-
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| Re: Crop Circle by Lenore |
T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 |
17-Oct-17/3:17 PM |
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This poem makes me want to be inside of a tree enveloped completely by tree matter and possibly choke on sap -8-
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| Re: Mad by Lenore |
T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 |
17-Oct-17/3:15 PM |
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This poem is so bad it's bad. I'd rather look at homeless knees for 10 minutes.
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| Re: If A Goat by impert&ent |
T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 |
17-Oct-17/3:13 PM |
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-0-, but +1 for not being actual face poison
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| Re: a comment on Victoria Applesmack and the Easy to Clean Wonder-Spleen by T. Jonathron Remp |
T. Jonathron Remp ::1 |
17-Oct-17/3:08 PM |
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Your liminal existence will be neither remembered nor forgotten but rather swallowed by presque-vu and digested into terminal nonexistence.
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| Re: Victoria Applesmack and the Easy to Clean Wonder-Spleen by T. Jonathron Remp |
Lenore 127.0.0.1 |
17-Oct-17/2:58 PM |
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Tardigrades need friends too!
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| Re: Muslim woman at the office by zodiac |
Lenore 127.0.0.1 |
16-Oct-17/2:42 PM |
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Awww shucks, no husks.
The quote from the pool party has no place in the office. 4
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| Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik |
Lenore 127.0.0.1 |
16-Oct-17/2:22 PM |
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I give the comments a 7! Bravo!
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| Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
Lenore ::1 |
16-Oct-17/2:14 PM |
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"I wear only the best" could've been better. Yeah, that line sucks. The rest, flows like stuff that flows good.
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| Re: A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
Lenore 127.0.0.1 |
16-Oct-17/2:07 PM |
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You had me at "coalishly pinched twin sink holes."
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| Re: Hey by impert&ent |
Lenore ::1 |
16-Oct-17/1:31 PM |
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| Re: a comment on our morning bed by daniella |
Christof ::1 |
13-Oct-17/2:22 AM |
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I'm still here! I got a notification that you read one of my poems. Nce to know someone still reads my stuff after so long. How are you?
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| Re: a comment on in a singular way by daniella |
<~> ::1 |
9-Oct-17/7:33 AM |
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wow. i don't think i've been here in a decade. i hope all is well with you.
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| Re: Making a Man by Christof |
daniella 127.0.0.1 |
8-Oct-17/9:06 PM |
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i feel the memories biting through. this is lovely. and i love how you are alluding to the inner man and the outer snow man at once...
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| Re: a comment on our morning bed by daniella |
daniella 127.0.0.1 |
8-Oct-17/9:03 PM |
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where can i find you now... after so many years?
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