Re: a comment on bitrot by nentwined	nentwined ::1	21-Apr-20/11:34 AM
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Re: Cannikin by Caducus	Dovina 127.0.0.1	21-Apr-20/10:57 AM
Hey Caducus, are you out there? This place is like a graveyard. I took a long trip and come home to a graveyard.
Re: protest chant by nypoet22	Dovina ::1	21-Apr-20/10:46 AM
Please don't say Soylent Green in the middle of a plague.
Re: A terzanelle on the subject of the moment by Adriaan	Dovina ::1	21-Apr-20/10:42 AM
Not fond of the form. 7 for handling it and for saying something.
Re: makin bacon by NICKDRP	Dovina ::1	21-Apr-20/10:39 AM
I'm sorry th ebest is all you have. Better luck next time.
Re: bitrot by nentwined	Dovina 127.0.0.1	21-Apr-20/10:27 AM
Thanks for keeping this forgotten place open and for giving me a lift.
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP	NICKDRP 127.0.0.1	18-Mar-20/12:45 PM
Its been years..and i know making bacon can be slow all you comments all your slurs means nothing..as we know snow and sleet sunday morn family love to talk and eat its all about the sizzle and not the meat when will you all learn stop analyzing the repeat off we go, making the bun tomato and cheese its all about fun good bye for good..love you all :)
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP	NICKDRP ::1	18-Mar-20/12:45 PM
Its been years..and i know making bacon can be slow all you comments all your slurs means nothing..as we know snow and sleet sunday morn family love to talk and eat its all about the sizzle and not the meat when will you all learn stop analyzing the repeat off we go, making the bun tomato and cheese its all about fun good bye for good..love you all :)
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP	NICKDRP 127.0.0.1	18-Mar-20/12:38 PM
Wonderful poem !!!!
Re: a comment on alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	19-Jun-18/5:11 PM
And in that note, go eat a dick and promptly swab the poopdeck.
Re: alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer ::1	19-Jun-18/5:05 PM
It is a sad day that I must say that I miss my old nemesis!
Re: a comment on alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer ::1	19-Jun-18/5:01 PM
Well, you dark twat bastard! I bloody well missed you!
Re: alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 127.0.0.1	19-Jun-18/4:55 PM
A profoundly silly piece. I can't be bothered to dig up the original Checkliste, but this bulgingly stupid offering certainly ticks a few dunce-boxes: [X] Arbitrary line breaks [X] Clerical errors [X] Cliched imagery (gazing out of window, pits of despair) [X] 'Depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness) [X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [X] Devoid of rhyme [X] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [X] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery [X] Drug reference [X] Melodramatic [X] Overabundance of ellipses [X] Pointedly unanswered questions [X] Self-obsessed -10-
Re: "The Zebra's Hoofbeats" by Lenore	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	17-Apr-18/11:05 PM
I like your word play. The beginning was great... Then it got a lil tedious. I can tell the ending was an attempt to fit in with your title... Title comes last, don't be constricted by it. Six, but you got a ten in there.
Re: And on and on and on by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	17-Apr-18/10:58 PM
Hmm.
Re: Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	17-Apr-18/10:56 PM
/me farts.
Re: that time i asked about dying by nypoet22	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	17-Apr-18/10:53 PM
Wtf is a tashlich mofo? I give it six. It's got more potential though.
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp	T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1	1-Nov-17/10:54 AM
I'd hope.
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp	nentwined ::1	1-Nov-17/10:51 AM
I love you. :)
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp	T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1	1-Nov-17/10:38 AM
For clarification: you.