Re: Stripes by JMakStak	Skamper 202.6.130.223	7-Jun-07/4:13 PM
The language is brilliant.
Re: Cephalonia by Caducus	Skamper 202.6.130.223	7-Jun-07/4:10 PM
For some hollywood reason I was wanting her to have been the one who killed him, for moaning about her bread. Is that what was meant or is the first stanza a little misleading? Or am I just being twisted?
Re: No-Strings by sca	Skamper 202.6.130.223	7-Jun-07/4:02 PM
Some great lines - not sure about the third stanza, doesn't really speak of the rebel, just some things that sound kinda rebellious.
Re: Call Someone Right Away by jessicazee	Skamper 202.6.130.223	7-Jun-07/3:44 PM
Pretty funny - darkly so, but a fair and just thankyou to your rescuer.
Re: a comment on Bitter by Ranger	lmp 141.154.134.3	7-Jun-07/3:42 PM
...and that in spite of two -0- votes. heh
Re: Bitter by Ranger	lmp 141.154.134.3	7-Jun-07/3:41 PM
heh, gratz on the number one slot....
Re: a comment on Barking Bargain by Dovina	lmp 141.154.134.3	7-Jun-07/3:38 PM
I *have* biked some pretty decent hills, but not in Ked-n-tucky or Kentucky either. also have fled more than a few doggies that saw my calves like something out of a old Bugs Bunny cartoon: roast poultry riding a bike. i suppose that's the advantage of the old 2 foot bike pumps instead of these little 6 inch ones they make these days; they used to make a pretty decent baton across a would-be biter's snout. you are correct about my solution not fixing the problem, and the issue is being overwrought, flogged, and re-hashed overmuch. i do look forward to the upcoming works in this series.
Re: a comment on The Equalizer by Skamper	Skamper 202.6.130.223	7-Jun-07/3:35 PM
don't really know much about the quandries philosophers get themselves into, but your comment about god indicates you missed the point.
Re: Humpty Dumpty's Regrettable Fate by MacFrantic	sca 124.191.64.6	7-Jun-07/1:17 AM
Hahaha... very entertaining much. Where did you pull this prom?
Re: Johnny Neurotic by Enkidu	sca 124.191.64.6	7-Jun-07/1:15 AM
I like this one a little better. Twas worth the read in thought alone. So many media references... I had to think it back twice to remember some of it, lol.
Re: One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu	sca 124.191.64.6	7-Jun-07/1:13 AM
What the random? You're not drunk or spaced, because the typing's coherent... but maybe it's transcipt of the post previously poorly written. Either way, a little more spastic fantastic than poetry. => Jess
Re: 0 by MacFrantic	sca 124.191.64.6	7-Jun-07/12:59 AM
Great minds think alike, eh? I like. Very, very much. So very clever, so very few words. I'm not going to check if it's bonified haiku or not (as form and strucure aren't a biggie in my books), but it's great. Oh god, oh snap, => Jess
Re: The Red Chain by MacFrantic	sca 124.191.64.6	7-Jun-07/12:57 AM
I don't understand the first line, and I'm not one for poetry that's so rephrased and rearanged it's fragmented, so this doesn't rate all that highly with me.
Re: a comment on Time Imperfect by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 71.196.178.205	7-Jun-07/12:27 AM
eloquently put.
Re: Shuushin the multi-personality total cunt by mr cunt	sca 124.191.64.6	6-Jun-07/11:05 PM
Haha, I could give you points for laughs. But I'm not going to. (and usually I hate poetry Nazis).
Re: Stripes by JMakStak	sca 210.8.228.185	6-Jun-07/9:13 PM
I love the rhythm and how the words just kinda weave in and out of each other. I like the edgy language, and how the rhyme isn't too obvious. It's great. Sexy in the other sense. => Jess
Re: Call Someone Right Away by jessicazee	Dovina 12.74.123.71	6-Jun-07/12:09 PM
It's a sad kind of funny. Just enough to make me think so anyway. More detail would help. And it's a bit too prosaic for poetry.
Re: Beslan by Ranger	Dovina 12.74.123.71	6-Jun-07/12:01 PM
I heard a balalaika played with Russian hands, and would prefer the singular in line 1, makes is more personal. And the possessive friction's in line 2 seems superfluous. Why is the fretted frame splintered? The triangular frame might be splintered, but the frets are on the fingerboard, and splinters would hurt. I like the sound of this, "holy minor fall of Hallelujah" especially.
Re: a comment on No-Strings by sca	Ranger 81.103.124.179	6-Jun-07/5:30 AM
lol, don't you just love emo poetry though? (almost as much as terrible irony)
Re: a comment on No-Strings by sca	sca 124.191.64.243	6-Jun-07/5:21 AM
PS - I'm the sometimes resonable but often blunt one.