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Call Someone Right Away (Free verse) by jessicazee
Thank you again for notifying
the authorities five days after my
El Dorado flipped very
upside down
in the shallow
rivermouth on your daddy's land!
Really thanks, you know, finally
for alerting someone, after
five days, my brother-in-law
who was driving, was dead
I think, but he never talked to me
anyway but I'm pretty sure he was dead
for all five days you saw us,
so thanks for telling someone that day
because I don't eat meat
and I came really close
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5059
Posted: June 5, 2007 9:14 PM PDT; Last modified: June 5, 2007 9:14 PM PDT
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