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Call Someone Right Away (Free verse) by jessicazee

Thank you again for notifying the authorities five days after my El Dorado flipped very upside down in the shallow rivermouth on your daddy's land! Really thanks, you know, finally for alerting someone, after five days, my brother-in-law who was driving, was dead I think, but he never talked to me anyway but I'm pretty sure he was dead for all five days you saw us, so thanks for telling someone that day because I don't eat meat and I came really close

richa 16-Jun-07/1:58 PM
I like the voice. I like the way you throw the last line too.




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