Dovina
on Valentine's Day is Two Days Away and I Don't Feel Loved by MacFrantic
14 Feb 2005, 3:17 PM
"Her charming come-hithers" is good. The rest so-so.
Thanks, jroday, for the âicing.â
Oh, but I do!
I would Ke-Ke, but I don't date thee ethnic.
You've obviously OD on chilled smegma.
Touch your toes, count to ten, and relax.
"fire and plum"?
Brought a smile to my face, but the
rest bored me stupid.
short, sweet, and 57 times to the point.
apparently, if i was junk food i'd be a cheeseball.
No words come close, to what I see in you, but no words
can explain. None I can think of ever do.
Many words come to mind. As there's so much more. But no words can express. And no tongue can tell. Just what
I see in you, or how I feel as well.
Just putting a little icing on the cake, and good luck.
if you say so. *6*
What do you expect, I was just a little drunk, by little a mean alot, when I wrote this.
<3 Jason
Give him about 4 more months, he'll at least have it running south. -9-
Ah, middle-eastern inspiration. I can't believe people failed to get this.
-Enkidu
-D. $ Fontera
Vinsanity! *5*
Wow, single stanzas are ruling write now. In this, it happens to be the last. *7*
There really should be more werewolf poems.
And 200 years ago, I'd have not been born to see you do so.
Actually I understand some of this comment a little more after reading the comments on "Goodbye". I don't think that you're arrogant and abrasive. You've got your ideas and thats what you write about. Everyone does it. You know as well as I do that people on The Ranker just like to pick at people to see how far they can push them (Bully Poets...there's an odd thing). It's actually funny because if they spent half as much time writintg as they did being assholes, this would be a better place. That's not going to happen though. For some reason they've pretty much stopped with me...either because I've gotten better at writing or because I'm just no fun to taunt because I dont care...I suspect the latter ;). I saw one kid even wrote a poem about you...and it wasn't crass and ignorant..amazed me but you gotta love that. The point is, there's good and there's bad and it's all what makes the poemeranker the best of it's kind.
P.S.-I know you already know all this and I don'y mean to preach to the choir.