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Free verse № 120045

broken pieces of a candy heart

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Feb 2005 · 1 comment

lifting shadows off a dream i awaken without your breath stealing kisses from memories and swiping time from death. four pillows are still adorned to the shivering side of my bed a monument to untold bliss a bag of feathers engaged in red. and while the silence in the morning air provokes an anguish most au contraire i'll take a smile of any degree just to maintain my sanity though i know its lost beneath a fist still clenched tight to a limp wrist and two lips drowned in a river of tears with two eyes too dryed to leer. last night i was your necromantic St. Valentine's mock turtle dove proving that digging up the past is no way to show undying love.

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[7] MacFrantic 13-Feb-05/9:47 AM Reply
Wow, single stanzas are ruling write now. In this, it happens to be the last. *7*