Poemranker [Poem: Starless] [by MacFrantic] Thu Nov 21 06:25:37 PST 2024

Half in and half out of shadows Like everything sinister But nothing quite certain Artful pain of the darkest light Feeds my hunger Drags my sable soul Admixed moon! Pitiless eyes above me! For what is this? This torture I am received? Oh! Oh! It is long until morning yet

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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)

	Graph	Votes
10		0	0
9		0	0
8		0	0
7		1	0
6		1	0
5		0	0
4		0	0
3		1	0
2		0	0
1		0	0
0		1	0

Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10136

Posted: February 10, 2005 11:39 AM PST; Last modified: February 12, 2005 1:53 PM PST
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[6] wilco @ 24.165.207.93 | 12-Feb-05/8:31 PM | Reply

As I've made no secret, I'm not a big fan of modern poetry that sounds like it was written 200 years ago. Still, it's not too bad so I'll vote 6.

Note-200 years ago, I'd have given it an 8.

[n/a] MacFrantic @ 152.163.100.138 > wilco | 13-Feb-05/9:44 AM | Reply

And 200 years ago, I'd have not been born to see you do so.

[n/a] MacFrantic @ 152.163.100.67 | 13-Feb-05/9:45 AM | Reply

There really should be more werewolf poems.

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